Double-Page Spread: 1st draft

As we start to wrap up our 1st draft, we now have to make our double-page spread and incorporate the article.

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Some of the feedback I got for my double-page spread is that there were to many pictures on the little corner. I agree with this, and the only reason why I had done this was because I felt there was too much space there. My classmates had also told me that the quote with a cutout picture of the interviewee was a good idea, so I am more then likely going to keep that in the double-page spread. Since my double-page spread and article weren't done, i couldn't receive any more feedback. Apart from the things stated above, my double-page spread was pretty good, but I think there is a lot to improve.